Recently, the topic of education has been the subject of increasing interest and attention among parents.(背景)More and more parents ask universities to raise their teaching quality and universities themselves also want increase their competitiveness.(背景)When it comes to where educational budget should go some people argue that investment is supposed to be devoted to classes and libraries, while others maintain that an equal amount of financial support should be given to sports and social activities. (观点改写)As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter.(主旨句)
To begin with, one of the major benefits of taking part in sports is that it is good to student’s health.(主旨)Whatever you do, you need a sound body first of all.(解释) Taking myself as an example, when I was at school, I went in for many sports at the expense of many pairs of sneakers, thus luckily building up a good physique, from which I benefit a lot.(例证)Meanwhile, taking exercise can also make us become more resilient.(补充) For example, if a student can finish five kilometers at one time, he will gain confidence so that when he is faced with new challenges in the future, he will have the courage to overcome it.(另例)
What’s more, in this fiercely competitive world, communication skills plays a more important role.(主旨)There are a lot of social activities in colleges and universities.(原因) When students are engaged in these social activities, they will know how to communicate effectively with people and develop team spirit, which more and more hiring managers demand.(结果) However, a hardworking student
who only focus on studying is more likely to have poor performance when it comes to team work because he or she has little time to invest in social intercourse.(对比)
All in all, financial support should be contributed to sports and social activities just like classes and libraries, since they can help students form a good body, increase willpower and develop communication skills.(总结)
TPO 02
The traditional virtue of telling the truth in all situations is increasingly doubted by many in today’s world.(背景)It seems that honest people are always taken advantage of by others.(背景) So some people argue that it’s unnecessary for us to showing honest all the time.(观点改写) However, as far as I am concerned, I disagree with them and hold the view that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.(主旨句)
To begin with, honesty is considered as the most important trait in friendship.(主旨) We all would like to make friends with those who are reliable and trustworthy.(解释) In contrast, if we catch one of our friends telling lies,he will be perceived as a lack of dependability.No matter how trivial this thing is, it may create a barrier between us.(例证) Therefore, although sometimes the truth is offending or not so nice to be heard, we’d better present honesty, if we want to see our friendship last.(总结)
What’s more, although telling some lies may seem harmless or even lucrative, we will eventually pay the price one day.(主旨) If we tell a lie, we will find we have to come up with more lies to cover the truth, which will make us to become a dishonest person.And when the truth is revealed, we will be condemned by morality.(例证)Taking advertisements as an example.To show off their products, some enterprises produce fancy and attractive advertisements to convince audience that their goods are worthy of buying.This may promote sales in short-term, but once consumers find these advertisements are mislead they won’t fall for it again.(另例)
After all, we can easily conclude that relationships are founded on trust. Thus, always telling the truth is always the best policy when dealing with people.(总结)
TPO 3
Needless to say, the number of acquaintances increases with one’s age.(背景)The older one get,the more acquaintances one is supposed to have.(背景)While some people hold the view that it’s more essential to keep old friends than making new friends, others think the opposite.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned ,keeping old friends is more important than making new ones.(主旨句)
First of all, old friends generally know you better than your new friends.(主旨) Since old friends have shared happiness and sorrows in our life ,we treat them more like family members.(原因)What’s more,as the saying goes,“There are no two identical leaves in the world”, we usually find we can’t see eye to eye with
our friends, in fashion,politics,music and the like.(补充)When conflict occurs in our friendship, we can better solve it with our old friends, since we understand each other better. However, a little conflict can easily make you and your new friends become estranged.(例证)Thus, the friendship between you and your old friends is more likely to last forever.(总结)
In addition, the friendship between you and your old friends is much more genuine.(主旨)For people in their forties or fifties ,when they look back their life they always find that true friendship is easily formed in primary or middle school days when they were inexperienced and free from the burden of life.(例证)On the contrary, when we make new friends ,we may take personal gains or losses into consideration,which makes the relationship less pure in nature.(对比)
All in all, although we meet various kinds of people every day, and have increasing number of acquaintances, our old friends are of more value than new ones since they have a better understanding of us and the relationship is much more pure.(总结)
TPO 04
Recent years have witnessed the surge of vehicles sales around the world .(背景)While some people hold the view that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today since we will prefer public transportation , other people predict the increasing use of cars in the future.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned, I agree with the later.(主旨句)
First of all, there is no denying that the demand for vehicles is still on the rise.(主旨) Since more and more people chose to live far away from downtown areas due to the high house prices, it will take more time for people to get to work, leading to increasing demand for vehicles.(例证) What’s more, vehicles are no loner a luxury for ordinary people -- more and more people are able to afford it.(补充) Thus, with the increase of individual income and improvement of living standard, we will see more cars running on the road.(总结)
Admittedly,the usage of vehicles may wreck havoc on the environment.(让步) But governments and enterprises have come up with many ways to minimize its negative effects.(转折) For example, governments have tried to help the new-energy vehicle industry through the use of subsidies. In China, the central government has rolled out a tax-free plan for new-energy vehicle owner.(例证) What’s more, the rapidly fluctuating gasoline prices will also drives individuals to give preference to clean energy vehicles.(补充)
In a word, although too many vehicles can cause some issues, the prospect of auto industry is still cheerful since more people will rely on cars and new-energy vehicles industry will develop rapidly in twenty years.(总结)
TPO 5
With the fast development of science and technology, we find our life much more amazing than ever.(背景)It’s has become common to find people staring at their cellphones for several hours. (背景)Thus, some people maintain that
nowadays people spend too much in doing things they like to do rather than they should do.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned, I disagree with them.(主旨句)
To begin with, people have to be concerned about what they should do to give themselves an edge in this fiercely competitive world.(主旨) Nowadays, versatility is what employers demand and for which they are willing to pay a premium.(原因)Thus for a promising career prospect upon graduation, college students have to be equipped with wider range of knowledge and work experience to make sure they can set themselves apart from other candidates.(结果) For example, many college students give up their interests and choose the major that can give them a secure and lucrative job.(例证)
Meanwhile, the reason why individuals are engaging in personal enjoyment is that they need to release their pressure.(主旨)In modern society, people are under intense pressure, either from work or study.(原因)Therefore, it’s essential for them to unwind themselves so they can improve their efficiency when they are back to work.(结果)Taking myself as an example, I always listen to my favorite music in breaks during my work to make sure that I can feel refreshed when I start to work again.(例证)
All in all, despite the development of entertainment industry, individuals are becoming more realistic and we can easily come to the conclusion that people today are more likely to spend more time on the things they should do rather than things they are interested in.(总结)
TPO 6
With the rapid development of technology and science, recent years have witnessed vast changes in our life.(背景)While some people argue that these changes produce negative effects on our lives, others maintain that our living standard has been largely improved.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned ,I think life today is much more comfortable than it was decades ago.(主旨句)
First of all, the presence of Internet has brought much convenience to us.(主旨)Years ago ,most people in China were deprived of opportunities to education, so my grandparents and most people of their time were illiterate.For them,it’s hard to imagine what the world was like in other part of the world and they never thought about meeting people from foreign countries.(例证)Our generation was much luckier - with the access to Internet ,we can not only have open classes offered by prestigious universities but also enjoy amazing foreign culture.(对比例证)
What’s more,the improvement of public transportation also enables us to travel more easily and comfortably.(主旨)Back to about 40 years ago, it took my grandfather several hours to travel from his home to the downtown area.What’s worse,since it cost a lot for them to take a train they seldom had the opportunity to take a tour.(例证)Now,the efficiency of traveling has been largely increased due to the wide-spread use of buses, trains, subways and even airplanes.Therefore, the present generation can more easily achieve their dreams of traveling around China or even the world.(对比例证)
All in all, although we live with faster pace and are under much more pressure, we can come to the conclusion that our lives have become much more comfortable compared with past several decades ago from the convenience brought by Internet and improvement of public transportation.(总结)
TPO 07
Recently, the topic of education has been the subject of increasing interest and attention among public.(背景)When it comes to education, parents will become talkative as if they were education experts.(背景)While some people argue that it’s more important to understand ideas and concepts than learn facts, others hold an opposite view.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the latter.(主旨句)
To begin with, one of the major benefits of leaning facts is that it is more easily to draw students’ interests.(主旨)For students, it’s essential to develop their interest in learning.(解释)Only when they start to enjoy the real pleasure of academic studies can they make great progress.(原因) However, ideas and concepts can be so boring that if teachers spend too much time on them, students will become sleepy in class.(结果)On the contrary, if we pay more attention to facts, which students can relate to, they may become interested in learning.(对比)
What’s more, if students have acquire new knowledge by learning facts, they will know how to apply it better.(主旨)In China, the biggest issue in education is that the exam-oriented education system has produced too many nerds who can
memorize all contents in textbooks but are unable to apply them.(解释)Admittedly, our studies are based on understanding ideas and concepts. (让步)Nevertheless, in this fiercely competitive job market, what hiring mangers seek for are talents who can apply principles.(转折) If we attach great importance to facts in our teaching process, we can address this issue caused by the theory’s divorce from practice.(总结)
All in all, we can easily conclude that we should make learning facts our priority since it can easily stir students’ appetite for studying and it is more useful and desirable nowadays because when students learn knowledge by facts rather than ideas or concepts they will know how to apply it in reality.(总结)
TPO 08
Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television. However, too much television advertisements, especially those directed toward children aged from two to five, has raised some concerns. (背景)Many parents fear that the television advertising targeted at young children will cause some mental and physical health problems.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned, I am strongly agree with them.(主旨句)
To begin with, one of the biggest concerns of parents is that these advertisements will produce negative effects on young children’s mental health.(主旨) Children aged from two to five are unable to tell good from bad.(原因) John F Kennedy once said, “A child miseducated is a child lost.” (引用)However,
these commercial advertisements appeared on television may be misleading or even fake, which are definitely detrimental to children’s mental health.(结果) Thus, for parents who want to make their children become thoughtful and well-educated, it’s essential for them to make sure their kids free from the negative effects of the television advertising and teach them how to distinguish right from wrong.(总结)
Meanwhile, these fancy television advertisements may also do harm to children’s physical health.(主旨)To show off their products, businessmen usually produce attractive and appealing advertisements.(解释)Children who are lured by them will spend several hours sitting in front of television for two or three hours straight, which is bad for their health .(例证)What’s more, long hours of staring at the television screen can harm their eyes, which may lead to eye discomfort or even shortsightedness at a young age.(另例)
All in all, we can easily conclude that although our lives are filled with all sorts of advertisements, those television ones directed toward young children who are aged from two to five should not be allowed since they may produce negative effects on them mentally and physically.(总结)
TPO 09
With the rapid growth of science and technology, almost every household has a personal computer and children are more likely to be exposed to Internet.(背景)While some people argue that advanced technology can act as tools for
children to create new things, others think it has made children less creative than they were in the past.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the latter.(主旨句)
First of all, one of the major dangers of digital devices is that they are altering our thinking patterns, lessening our ability to brainstorm and making us less creative.(主旨) Albert Einstein once said, “The greatest danger in modern technology is not that machines begin to think like people, but that people will begin to think like machines.”(引用) His worry was not unnecessary - nowadays students always ask \"Google\" or “baidu” when they have problems in their homework, instead of thinking by themselves, which is not useful for them to raise innovation ability.(例证)
Meanwhile, since we spend too much time on surfing the Internet, we have little time to think systematically.(例证) For example, while waiting for the subway, we check our emails to kill time; on our way home, we browse through weibo, which offers us much segment information; and on weekends, we stare at our cellphones for several hours straight.(例证) Indulging ourselves in Internet prevents us from digesting information and thinking strategically.(解释) Not to mention those negative repercussions caused by computer games.(另例)
All in all, although technology has brought great convenience to us, it is detrimental for us to cultivate innovative talents since we have been so dependent on it that we are too lazy to use our brain and we stop integrating information and engaging in critical thinking anymore.(总结)
TPO 10
Nowadays, almost every household has access to Internet due to the rapid growth of science and technology and the affordability of computers.(背景)However, the rising popularity of computer games raises concerns among parents ,who fear that games will waste their children too much time.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned, I hold the same view with these parents.(主旨句)
One of the major drawbacks of playing computer games is that it will prevent children from investing time to more beneficial and meaningful things.(主旨)There is no denying that the priority of teenagers is studying, which requires a lot of time and energy if one wants to perform well in exams.(解释) If he spends too much time in playing computer games, he will not have enough time to engage in study.(例证) So playing computer games takes up children much time which could otherwise be allocated to something more useful.(总结)
Another risk of engaging in computer games is that it will produce harmful effects on children physically.(主旨)A teenager addicted to computer games will find himself sitting in front of his laptop for two or three hours straight during weekends, which is bad for his health, especially for his muscle and back. (例子)What’s more, long hours of staring at the computer screen can harm our eyes, which may lead to eye discomfort or even shortsightedness.(另例) If our children spend less time on computer games, they will have more time to work out so that they can build a sound physique.(对比)
In a nutshell, while many children claim that computer games can help them release pressure or even develop their social skills, it’s worth-noticing that they will leave little time for children to study and cause some physical problems .So it’s wise for parents to forbid children playing too much computer games.(总结)
TPO 11
With the rapid growth of technology and science, our life have undergone tremendous changes, especially when Internet came to our life.(背景)Although some people argue that access to much information creates lots of issues, others hold the view that we acquire much useful information from Internet.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned,I agree with the latter.(主旨句)
One of the major benefits of Internet is that it allows us to promote relationships with others.(主旨) Just like John Donne said, “No man is an island, entire of itself; every man is a piece of the continent; A part of the main.”(引用) To advance communication among people, we have many social networks, like WeChat, Facebook and Weibo.(解释)With vast information provided by them, we could know our friends better, thus helping us to bond with our friends.(结果)For example, I originally thought Amy, one of my classmate in middle school was difficult to get along with. However, though her weibo I found she was very kind and we shared a lot of interests, so I always commented on her weibo and we became really good friends.(例证)
Another benefit of Internet is that it enables us to acquire knowledge easily
and quickly.(主旨) For people who didn’t perform well in National College Entrance Examination but still hold a desire for knowledge, they can watch online Open Classes in first-class college on various kinds of topics, such as computer science, economics, linguistics, and the like. When they encounter some questions in their studies they can also look for answers in Baidu Zhidao.(例证)
What’s more, it also helps us to broad our horizon.(主旨) By surfing through the Internet, we are able to experience foreign cultures, like foreign festivals, movies and music, which would otherwise remain strange to us forever.(例证)
In conclusion, Internet provides us with lot of useful information which helps us to advance our relationships, learn knowledge and expand our horizon.(总结)
TPO 12
Success is something that many people strive for, but what is the key factor of becoming successful?(背景) Is it wider spectrum of knowledge or specialization in one specific subject? (背景)While some people maintain that specialization is of more importance, others give preference to broad knowledge of many academic subjects.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the latter.(主旨句)
To begin with, wider spectrum of knowledge can help set us apart from other candidates when we try to land a job.(主旨)In this fiercely competitive employment market, versatility is what employers demand and for which they are willing to pay a premium.(解释) With various kinds of elective courses provided by universities,
college students can acquaint themselves with a variety of knowledge about economics,finance,law,linguistics, and the like.(结果)Thus when they venture into the real world upon graduation, their interdisciplinary knowledge will give them an edge so that they can stand out among other candidates.(总结)
Furthermore, wider range of knowledge means a wider circle of friends.(主旨) There is no denying that people tend to make friends with those who share the same interest with themselves.(解释) Those who have acquired knowledge in many subjects will find themselves more easily strike up conversations with strangers since they can quickly find the topic that the other party are interested.(例证) On the contrary, an IT female student who is excellent in computer science but knows nothing about fashion may finds herself hard to fit in a group of trendy girls.(对比例证)
In conclusion, compared with specialization in one specific subject, wider range of knowledge is more significant since it offers them more opportunities in employment market and help them expand their social networking.Thus we should develop our interests in various fields and equip ourselves with knowledge as much as possible.(总结)
TPO 13
With the ever-increasing pace of advancing of science and technology, the nuclear family is become more and more popular.(背景)While some people think extended family still plays an important role in modern society, others think the
opposite.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the latter.(主旨句)
To begin with, family members are not as close as they were years ago.I(主旨)n the past, relatives always lived in the same village, so they were intimately involved with each other.(解释) However, due to the rapid development of urbanization, nowadays the extended family members are scatted to different part of China and more and more people who have adequate money even choose to live abroad.(对比) Taking myself as example, I could only meet my grandparents on traditional Chinese festivals when we have family reunions.(例证) Thus, sometimes we find it difficult for us to relate well to our relatives anymore.(总结)
What’s more, an important role that extended family plays is to help with family affairs.(主旨) So years ago, when someone in the big family had any trouble, such as financial problem or career selection, the rest of family members would come to give him a hand.(例证) However, nowadays when some crisis occur, we would like to seek assistance from our friends rather than from our relatives. For example. if we are come down with a flu and stay at home to recover we would ask our friends to visit us rather then call our relatives in our extended family.(对比例证)
All in all, we can easily conclude that although extended family was of great importance decades of years ago, it’s an inevitable trend that nuclear family will replace it since we are not as close with our other relatives as we were and we are now inclined to seek help from our friends.(总结)
TPO 14
Nowadays, with the improvement of our living standard, more and more people have extra money and more leisure time.(背景)To spend our leisure time, lots of people decide to take a trip, either in their own countries.(背景)While some people argue that we benefit more from a domestic travel than traveling abroad, others would rather choose to the latter than the former.(观点改写)As far as I am concerned, I think it’s better for us to take a overseas travel.(主旨句)
First of all, overseas travel can greatly broaden our horizon.(主旨)Traveling abroad, we will find a whole new wold open up in front of us.(解释)The exotic landscapes, cuisine and customs are more attractive and appealing to us than familiar ones in our countries.(解释) If you want to amplify your experiences and absorb refreshing ideas, you definitely want to visit Yellowstone National Park in USA, Westminster Abbey in London and so on.(例证) You can never become acquainted with foreign cultures if we if we lack experiences of overseas travel.(对比例证)
What’s more, traveling abroad can stir our appetites for exploring new things.(主旨句)Needless to say, we will be faced with many challenges in a foreign country.(解释)We may find ourselves unaccustomed to the local food, totally lost about local customs and can not even understand their languages.(例证)But if we can conquer these difficulties, we will gain confidence so that when we meet another challenge in the future we will have strength to overcome it.(解释) However, if we refuse to set foot outside our countries, we will find ourselves
repeat our footprints again and again.(对比论证)
All in all, we can easily conclude that since making a tour abroad can greatly expand our outlook and give us courage to conquer new challenges, it is more beneficial for us to traveling to a foreign country than in our own country.(总结)
TPO 15
In modern society, financial ability has played an increasingly essential role and is considered as a necessary skill. (背景)While some individuals maintain that it’s too early to teach children how to manage money when they are at a young age, others think the opposite.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the latter.(主旨句)
To begin with, learning to manage money makes them understand how hard it is to earn money so they can develop the money saving habit.(主旨句) Due to the one-child policy, most children now are apples of their parents’ eyes and some who are born with a silver spoon are usually spoiled by their close relatives.(解释) For those children who always get their ways at home, they always waste money on many fancy things of no use.(例证) However, if their parents teach them how to manage money, they will realize how precious money is and learn to save it.(总结)
Another benefit that this practice can engender is that it can teach them how to make money. (主旨句)People who are familiar with the story of Warren Buffett must know that he displayed an interest in business and investing at a young age.
While still in high school ,he made money by delivering newspapers, selling golf balls ,stamps and the like. (例证)If a child was taught how to manage his budget and invest money into things that can increase his fortune, he is more likely to achieve financial success in the future.(总结)
In conclusion, in order to make children become financially responsible adults in the future, parents should nurture their financial abilities when they are young since it can help them develop money saving habit and teach them how to increase their fortune.(总结)
TPO 16
With the improvement of our living standard, more and more people have extra money and more leisure time. (背景)To spend our leisure time, lots of people, especially senior citizens, decide to take a trip. (背景)While some citizens prefer to be led by a tour guide, others choose to travel on their own. (观点改写)As far as I am concerned, I would rather become a backpacker.(主旨句)
To begin with, one of the major advantages of traveling on our own is that we will have more free time during our trip.(主旨句) The biggest difference between group tour and individual one is that the former has everything planned while the latter enables us to experience many wonderful and unexpected things, which could greatly enhance the joy of traveling.(解释) What’s more, tourists traveling in a tour always complain that their tour guide always asked them to shopping and the time allocated to tourist attractions were too little for them to enjoy natural
wonders and picturesque landscape.(补充)
Furthermore, backpackers need to plan for their trip in advance, from which they can derive great pleasure.(主旨句)Taking myself as example, I took a trip on my own to Xiamen last year. Before my departure, I studied every scenic spot in great details and checked out the bus route and schedule. During the whole process of planning, I had achieved sense of accomplishment, which group tour was unable to offer.(例证) What’s more, when I visited the Nanpu Temple and Gulang Island and enjoy delicious food at restaurants recommended by local friends I knew that taking a trip on my own was a rewarding decision.(补充)
In conclusion, although the group tour can bring much convenience, traveling on our own seems to be more appealing since we can find great pleasure in the planning process and enjoy freedom in the trip.(总结)
TPO 17
Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television, the streets and increasingly on the Internet.(背景)As one of the most useful ways for companies to promote their products, advertisements should be true and accurate.(背景)However, most businessmen make their products seem much better than they really are to make a greater profit.(主旨句)
To begin with, many advertising companies produce fancy advertisements with famous and popular actors, singers, sport stars or super models.(主旨句)
Although these celebrities may not be users of the products they advertise, audiences especially those who admire them would choose to believe in their idols.(例证)This may promote sales in short-term, but once consumers find these advertisements are mislead they won’t fall for it again.(补充)
In addition, many businessmen are too concentrated on profits and ignore the moral standards.(主旨句) To show off their products, some enterprises even take unethical practices,that is, producing fake advertisements, which can lead to various negative repercussions.(解释)Taking fake advertisements of medicines of losing weight as an example.These advertisements usually exaggerate the effect and agitate audience to have a try. However, these products either turn out to be useless or even harmful to our health.(例证)
In conclusion, although for businessmen advertisements are used to convince buyers that their products are worthy of buying , they shouldn’t show off them too much. On the contrary, they are supposed to stop producing misleading advertisements and maintain a high ethical standard so that we can achieve more profits in the long run.(总结)
TPO 18
Recently, the topic of education has been the subject of increasing interest and attention among parents.(背景)Since students in schools are mainly surrounded by teachers and friends, they are either be affected by teachers or peers. (背景)While some people think teachers exert greater effects on students, others think the
opposite. (观点改写)As far as I am concerned, friends have greater influence on students than teachers do.(主旨句)
To begin with, peer pressure has been called a hallmark of adolescent experience.(主旨句) Friends has become an important influence on behavior during adolescence.(解释) Whenever we are in a group we want to fit it ,so we will change our attitudes, values, or behaviors to conform to groups.(解释)Thus many adolescents imitate their friends’ behaviors,style, taste, appearance, ideology, and values.(结果) For example, if a student has friends who are diligent and industrious, he or she is more likely to be excellent in academics.(总结)
Furthermore, our friends usually have a better understanding of ourselves.(主旨句) We always share same interests with our friends, such as passions for music, movies, reading, traveling and the like.(原因)Thus we can exchange ideas on a variety of topics or even confide to each other. What’s more, since we communicate more often with our friends, their points of views may sway our opinions.(结果)On the contrary, students only have limited time to spend with their teachers. Even though we have a discussion with them, it is more like to be about studies.(对比)
In conclusion, given the great power of peer pressure and that our friends know us more better than our teachers, the former can exert greater influence on us .(总结)
TPO 19
Nowadays, with the access to Internet we can easily find out any information that we are interested in.(背景)While some people argue that people must get information from various news sources to become well-informed, others think that since we are surrounded by too much information, we should absorb it selectively.(观点改写)As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the latter.(主旨句)
To begin with, the majority of information offered by news sources is segment information.(主旨句) Apart from mainstream news sources, we also get information from social media.(解释) If you are a frequent user of weibo, you will find there are millions of new posts every day, which may sway our views.(例证) Thus, if we pay equal attention to all segment information, we will never achieve the goal of being informed since we may lose our focus.(总结)
Meanwhile, we need to digest information in order to think more strategically.(主旨句) If we spend too much time on a variety of news sources, we will have little time to integrate all sorts of information.(解释)Taking Mikhail Prokhorov, a billionaire as an example. He doesn’t own a cell phone and claims to rarely use a computer.“I don’t use a computer. We have too much information nowadays.”Maybe this is why he is able to run such a successful business.(例证) In order to be well-informed, the ability to think systematically may be more essential than simply absorbing all kinds of information.(总结)
All in all, although different news sources can provide us with all sorts of news, it is wise for us to have our preferences and use some time to integrate
information in order to be a well-informed person.(总结)
TPO 20
Success is something that many people strive for，but that not everyone among us attains.(背景)When it comes the recipe of the success of celebrities, some people maintain that they experience new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well. (观点改写) As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with them.(主旨句)
To begin with, one of the major benefits of constantly challenging ourselves is that it teaches us how to deal with failure.(主旨句) The result of trying things stranger to us may not be desirable or satisfying.(解释) However, as the saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success”, we must realize that no one can achieve success overnight without making any blunder and learn to concede our failure.(引用) It’s a daunting task as it’s much easier to engage in things that we are familiar with. (解释)But only once we’ve learned how to confront challenges can we really begin to make progress.(总结)
Furthermore, people who always try new things are more likely to live a much more meaningful life.(主旨句) Most people find their lives are stuck in a rut and are tired of doing the same thing every day. (解释)If they could make up their minds to try something new and push themselves toward limits in face of challenges, they will know that life is full of possibilities.(例证) This enables them to gain confidence to confront other challenges, which creates a virtuous circle.(总结)
In conclusion, compared with doing things we have already been familiar with, engaging in new things turn out to be more rewarding since it can teach us how to face with failure and live a more wonderful life.(总结)
TPO 21
Success is something that many people strive for, but what is the key factor of becoming successful?(背景)Is it networking or hardworking?(背景)While some people hold the view that having more contacts plays a more important role than studying hard in school, other people think the opposite. (观点改写) As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the former.(主旨句)
To begin with, one of the major advantages of connections is that they can provide us with a variety of valuable information.(主旨句) For example, if a job seeker has friends who work in the HR department, a piece of information offered by them can be of great help.(例证) In some cases, our acquaintances can even help us when we are in trouble.(另例) As the saying goes, “At home one relies on one's parents and outside on one's friends”.(引用) It wise for us to have more contacts so that when we encounter problems who have friends to turn to.(总结)
Another benefit of networking is that it can help us to develop communication skill ,which has become increasing essential in this fiercely competitive employment market.(主旨句)Nowadays, team spirit is a valuable trait that we should develop since it is what more and more hiring managers demand. (解释)However, a hardworking student is more likely to have poor performance when
it comes to team work because he or she has little time to invest in social intercourse.(例证)
In conclusion, although academic performance is importance for students, their networking is a more valuable asset since it can offer them lots of information and help them develop communication skill.(总结)
TPO 22
In a 45-minute-long class, some teachers intentionally or unintentionally express their social and political views to students in the classroom. (背景)While some consider this necessary and beneficial, others hold the view that if teachers convey their opinions on society and politics to students in class it can lead to many negative repercussions.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned,I strongly agree with the latter.(主旨句)
One of the major downsides of this practice is that it will divert students’ attentions in the class.(主旨句) Since a teacher is functioned to impart useful and valuable knowledge to students as much as possible, he or she should take full advantage of 45 minutes and concentrate on teaching and discussing academic-related issues.(解释) If teachers convey his views on society or politics, students may be distracted, which has negative effects on the efficiency of attending lectures.(例证)
Another risk of expressing social and political views to students in the
classroom is that it may influence students’ views.(主旨句) Due to the lack of social experience and a strong sense of right and wrong, students usually don’t have a clear view on society or politics.(原因) Therefore, when teachers discuss or constantly talk about these issues in the class, students’ point of views are easily swayed. (结果)What’s worse,if his opinion is biased and unable to represent that of the majority, students may form anti-social opinions.(补充)
In conclusion, since when teachers make their social and political viewpoints known to students, it divert their attentions and sway their opinions, I personally consider this harmful for the education of students.(总结)
TPO 23
Recent years have witnessed tremendous changes in our lives. Among them, one of the most significant changes is that we live with a faster pace, which put forward new demands in workplace.(背景)While some individuals maintain that it’s more essential to work at a high speed and risk making errors than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.(观点改写)As far as I am concerned, efficiency and accuracy should be given equal importance.(主旨句)
To begin with, the fast pace of life makes efficiency increasing important, especially in large cities. (主旨句)In our constantly changing society, we are faced with much challenges than ever.(解释) Every company is aimed to increase its productivity and every employer wants to see an efficient worker. (解释)As a result, to meet these great challenges, we need to improve our efficiency and try to keep
pace with the whole society so we will not fall behind.(结果)
However, it’s unwise for us to seek high efficiency at the cost of accuracy.(主旨句) When we had examinations in our school days, we were asked to check our test paper several times before we handed it in.(解释) Those who finishing their tests too soon would always find that they achieve much lower grades than they had expected.(例证) As a matter of fact, they could had higher scores if they had checked their test paper carefully .(总结)The same rule also applies to work. There is no mangers who are glad to see lots of mistakes in our work. So, we need to attach great importance to accuracy.(补充)
In conclusion, efficiency and accuracy should receive equal emphasis since each has its role to play in workplace. Thus, we should work at a high speed and make sure that everything is on the right track at the same time.(总结)
TPO 24
Recently, with the popularity of Tiger Mom, an Chinese television comedy-drama series starring Zhao Wei and Tong Dawei, the topic of education has been the subject of increasing interest and attention.(背景)While some parents think that one of the best ways to help their teenage children prepare for an adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job, others hold the opposite view. (观点改写)As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the former.(主旨句)
To begin with, one of the major benefits of taking on a part-time job is that it
can help them gain valuable insight into the future career path.(主旨句) Four-year long studying in a college may not be enough for teenagers to figure out what career path they are going to take upon graduation. (解释)However, part-time jobs they undertake enable them to narrow interests and define career objectives, so when they try to seek a job in the employment market, they will have a clear career direction and goal.(例证)
Another advantage of part-time jobs is that it trains teenagers how to allocate their time outside of class.(主旨句)There is no denying that nowadays students have a heavy course load, so the time-manage skills becomes increasing significant in this competitive world.(解释)If a college student can perform well in both examinations and his work, he must be good at time-management.(例证)
In a nutshell, one of the best approach for teenagers to prepare themselves venturing into the real world is to encourage them to have a part-time job since this work experience can set them apart from other candidates owing to their clear career goals and excellent time-management skill.(总结)
TPO 25
With the rapid development of science and technology, our world has undergone tremendous changes.(背景)Thus, people in modern society like to compare young generation with old generation.(背景)While some people consider present generation to be energetic and responsible others always criticize young people that they are selfish and apathetic.(观点改写) As far as I am concerned, I
strongly agree with the latter.(主旨句)
To begin with, our generation are becoming more and more self-centered.(主旨句)Due to the one-child policy, most children now are apples of their parents’ eyes and some who are born with a silver spoon are usually spoiled by their close relatives. For those children who always get their ways at home, they pay little attention to other people’s needs.(例证) They only care about their own feelings and desires, so they spend little time to contribute to communities. (总结)
What’s more, not to mention helping communities, present generation even think little about their own family members.(主旨句)Taking my friends who have already had children as example, although they love their children, they do not share the idea of their parents that one can never do too much in his lifetime to help his children. They think of their kids as an encumbrance to them. “I would like to give away my kids to anyone who is willing to take them!” That’s what they always complain when they are fed up with them.(例证)
Admittedly, there are some teenagers who are kind and heart-warming.(让步) When a powerful earthquake hit Wenchuan County in Sichuan Province, many teenagers offered to be volunteers to support the earthquake stricken areas.(例证) Nevertheless, majority of our generation are only thinking about themselves.(转折)
All in all, we can easily conclude that compared with our parents and people of their time, young people nowadays do not give enough time to assisting their communities.(总结)
TPO 26
In this fiercely competitive society, career planning is becoming increasingly important for college students.(背景)While some people hold the view that it is more beneficial for children to follow in the footsteps of their parents when they decide which career path they are going to take, others think the opposite. (观点改写)As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the former.(主旨句)
To begin with, parents can provide us with many useful advice, which can be severed as an valuable asset.(主旨句) While everyone wants to climb up the corporate ladder, not everyone can achieve this goal. (解释)If you share similar occupations with your parents, they can offer you their networks and precious information, from which you can benefit a lot, thus greatly increasing your possibility of success.(例证)
Meanwhile, it can also help to bridge the generation gap.(主旨句) In this fast-pacing modern society, children always complain that they and their parents lack mutual-understanding, so they are not that close with each other. (解释)However, a similar job can be a good topic of conversation. Thus, if we take similar job to their jobs, we can exchange career ideas with each other, which is a good bonding opportunity.(总结)
All in all, we can easily conclude that it is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to our parents’ ones not only since with our parent’s advice, we can more easily get ahead in our career ,but also because it can help us to narrow
the generation gap between us and our parents.(总结)
TPO 27
In this fiercely competitive job market, how to land a job is becoming more and more important. If you are offered a secure job, what will you do?(背景)While some people argue that we should take it right away others think that we would better wait for a more satisfying job. (观点改写)As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the latter.(主旨句)
To begin with, we need to be deliberate about our career planning.(主旨句) When we try to find a job, we should not just focus on job security or our salary. We should look at things in the long run, especially for new college graduates. We are supposed to have an outstanding start of career since a poor one may lead to a lifelong sorrow.(解释) Needless to say, work experience plays an important role now in employment market, but here we are talking about useful experience.(进一步解释)For a graduate who wants to be a teacher, his intern experience in HR department may be of little use.(另例)
What’s more, for people who are highly skilled or sophisticated, they can afford to wait for better opportunities.(主旨句) These people resign from their last work either due to dissatisfaction with their salaries or their superiors.(原因) Therefore, when they choose their new work, they may take a lot of things into consideration: chance of promotion, subsidiaries, personnel policy and the like.(结果)
Admittedly, turning down a secure job may risk our career prospects as it has become more and more difficult for us to land a satisfying job.(让步) However, if we take this job and find it turn out to be boring or unsuitable for us, what will we do then? Either quitting this job or tolerate this terrible job, we will suffer more loss.(转折)
All in all, we can easily conclude that we should think thoroughly before we choose which career path we are going to take. If there is a secure job for us, we should not take it at once since it will do more harm than good. Instead, we should wait for a desirable job that we are interested in.(总结)
TPO 28
Education has always played an important role in our society and if a country wants to win a place a in the future it must lay great emphasis on education.(背景)As far as I am concerned, modern parents are more involved in their children’ s education than parents were in the past.(主旨句)
To begin with, due to one-child policy in China, parents has paid more attention to their children since their energy has been saved a lot compared to those who owned several children.(主旨句) In the past, it had already been difficult for parents support their families so they had little energy to invest in education of their children.(对比) On the contrary, since majority of Chinese families are single-child, there is no doubt that this child is the apple of their parents’ eyes and they expect much of her or him, which makes the education a priority in
families.(对比)
In addition, there have appeared many art works concerning education.(主旨句) There is no denying that art works well reflect our society and express public opinions ,so many education-related works nowadays somewhat show that individuals have become more interested in education. (解释)Taking the recent poplar education-themed TV drama, Tiger Mom as example. This TV drama tells the story of a strong-willed disciplinarian mother who faces mountainous pressure raising her daughter and her husband who maintains that the happiness of their children is the most important, even if that means being academically behind.(例证) Its popularity severs as a strong evidence that education has become a hot issue.(总结)
In conclusion, we can find out that parents in modern society has attached greater importance to education through the population policy and popularity of more education-related art works.(总结)
TPO 29
Recently, the topic of education, especially higher education has been the subject of increasing interest and attention among people.(背景)When it comes to how to improve the quality of education, while some maintain that we should spend more money on professors, others argue that we can invest that money to other things.(观点改写)As far as I am concerned, I think we should not only raise professors’ salaries but also invest on other things.(主旨句)
To begin with, since the quality of a university’s faculty are closely related to its competitiveness, we are supposed to promote professors’ enthusiasm by raising their salaries.(主旨句) There is no denying that the teaching quality begins to play a decisive role in this fiercely competitive world.(解释) However, more and more college students complain that as their teachers just read PPT and pay little attention to their responses in the class, they feel these lectures are so boring that they become sleepy.(例证) If we increase teachers’ salaries, they will put more efforts and energy in their classes.(总结)
Despite the essential role of professor, we should also come up with other ways to raise the education quality.(主旨句) For example, we can spend more money in buying facilities. With these new acquisitions, students will get equal chance to acquiring knowledge.(例证) What’s more, we can also pay elites in all walks of life and invite them to give lectures, in which they can share their insights.(补充)In this way, we can greatly inspire students’ creativity and stir their imagination.
(总结)
All in all, it’s not only one factor that determines education quality. Thus, it’s essential to increase salaries for university professors and invest money on other aspects at the same time.(总结)
TPO 30
In this fiercely competitive world, work efficiency has been the subject of increasing interest and attention among people.(背景)While some people argue that in order to increase work efficiency, we can work only three days for longer hours, others hold the view that we should not regulate our working schedule. (观点改写)As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the former.(主旨句)
To begin with, one of the major benefits of this new working schedule is that we can have more time for vacation.(主旨句) If we only have two days off every week, we may find it is too short for us to plan a vocation. However, if we can working long hours, we will have two extra days for vocation. In this way, we can either go aboard for travelling or visit our old friends in other cities, releasing intense pressure from work.(例证) Thus, when we return back to work we will feel refreshing and energetic, which is beneficial for us to increase our work efficiency.(总结)
What’s more, longer working-hours means that we can achieve consistency. (主旨句)When we find our tasks can not be finished in eight-long hours, we will drop it at the end of our work and pick up from where we leave off tomorrow.(例证)However, this may decrease our working efficiency since when we start to deal with them again we may become less familiar with them and even miss some details so we have to invest more time to complete our tasks, which could have been finished in fewer hours.(解释)However, with this new working schedule we can have extra hours to handle them.(总结)
Admittedly, long hours of working may cause some healthy problems.(让步)
Nevertheless, these problems can be solved if we remember to take a break every one or two hours. For example, to protect our eyes, we can close our eyes for several minutes. And we can also move our body or even do a little exercise during our break.(转折)
All in all, we can easily conclude that since longer working hours can offer us opportunities to arrange a and achieve consistency, it’s wise for us to change our old working schedule.(总结)
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